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Lovely night with you

Oh what lovely night to stare into your crystallized eyes That are softly lit by the lovely little yellow candlelight that sends my heart and soul sailing deep within the extravagant blue sea of ecstasy.

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why cant you just try it like this for once for us oldies?

Oh what lovely night
to stare into your crystallized eyes
That are softly lit
by the lovely little yellow candlelight
that sends my heart and soul sailing
deep within the extravagant blue sea of ecstasy.

Humour me once? Your words are gorgeous just i think love what you do instead of spreading it where you want, make it presentable not for me but for these beautiful lines?

Thank you...Teddy

I usually get my inspiration for my poems by listening to music or watching scenes from black and white movies it brings ideas in my head which I then write and interpret the ideas or thoughts in my head into
My poems.

I don’t know what stanzas are or how to use them. I usually just write it down while I’m thinking it in my head .
I don’t want to be in a relationship because I don’t want the drama. Because I hate loud noises and that usually comes with drama.

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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So they are a verse of words that lead to another

Depending on the size of the poem. When there is a break in the work. Look it up you seem to be intelligent
Obvious if you feel you don't need to I will no longer bother with my thoughts.
I came here as a young one and I took all my reviews to heart in a very good way of taking on board the experience. But hey we are all different. If you want to learn come find me or indeed someone more achieved than I

Thank you...Teddy

young one
ur so lovely
let all understand your metaphors openly
all young chicks
will love thee
no comparison are we
sans all
OLDIES

o lad you will make us all glad
be happy u enlighten
15
and many like me

Thank you I hope your doing well in this world that’s corrupted by this horrid corona

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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Still not feeling the love for the lines Edward, don't feel shamed to do it as someone shows but of course up to you. The lines need to make sence dear. Making it a joy for the reader to follow.

Thank you...Teddy

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