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Love Your Life Okay

On a day to day basis
find at the twilight
they have found the darkness
entwine the daylight
only with a hope
the dawn twilight
will be born aright

for all to look upon
as long as there is
day light today
another day
lovely good day
another life's day
gone away

a tomorrow will surely come
as another today
so why not on this only
Paradise Earth not stay

we all must not make hay
as long as sun shines
today
tomorrow it may
not may
could rain all humour drain
while some will life sustain

each one has own choosing
of his lively day
so have you
No 19 Covid
today
some day
or another day
let's call it any day
come what may

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I compose at my pleasure to help increase your humour in equal measure 'twill be a treasure
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we all are bacteria
scientifically
all else is melody

we all will vanish slowly
as humans are taken over digitally
none will then have emotions
like ROBOTS
like me and ye

no need of dark poetry
all will be slotted
to the slotting machine
no big bacteria like us
will ever again be seen
AND
this surely
I mean

author comment

So why not call this one

An ode to today?

Or simply, Today

We are living day to day in my home anyway. We don't know what will be coming over the next month's when the cold arrives but as you rightly say
We go on regardless.

Thank you...Teddy

shall await
CONSENSUS
Ma'am

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