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Love Story (FedEx Edition)
Walking in our front door,
a multi-colored package in my hand
promising something has arrived for someone
“Is that something for me?”, her playful query
“No, it’s just my meds from the good doctor.”
“Still seems like a gift for me.”, her reply
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Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Another brevity excersise. I'm not lazy, honest - LOL!
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San Francisco Bay Area - USA
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Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)
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Lavender
Sun, 2023-01-29 15:54
Love Story (FedEx Edition)
Hi, Michael,
Very nice. A tender, preserved moment. I think FedEx should hire you in their marketing department!
L
Michael Anthony
Sun, 2023-01-29 22:34
Haha! Thanks L! Best
Haha! Thanks L!
Best
Michael Anthony
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