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Love ....a Sonnet for you MY FIRST SONNET EVER!

In the moonlight I see your sparkling face
I recollect yours such a charming smile
Where can anyone love so tender ever trace
Except in your romance all my while

The candle light flickers tonight
All fire burns me out like a forest
But still I will keep it aright
When I think of you being so modest

Champagne we shall have so free
All will also enjoy some water of coconut
Candy will be served along with tea
For those who love to have salted peanut

Love and my heart shall rejoice
Tenderness and tears would be your choice

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I know not much about Sonnets, but I found this to be a very tender poem.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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raj (sublime_ocean)

ur reading it is enough pat on my back thanks friend

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indeed. Yet the form of the sonnet is very strict re meter.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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do read it with eyes closed
as in Braille
then along with my sonnet
you shall sail

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i love this piece............... maestro

I'm happy it meets the sonnets needs

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