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love only oh man

beautiful poetry on love
but whilst you are on mother earth
find a real LOVE...

all the best poet dear
many will like you to endear
and love them as youth warrants you
and then alone heavens will welcome you

for the service you rendered on mother earth
where you had been sent
to Y chromosomes present
and lend the selfish gene
a loving hand
wherein man can continue
as long as one can

lend him yours too
as then only a whole being
they all will consider you

I am done with this world my friend
nearer arriveth my end

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We have much to do
another write for me,
of Digit can't you see.
Then many more before eternity.
Then the Young Bard what of you,
I have to go first, so that I can show you
The beauty that is more
than thought here can say
It is the echoes of the universe ,
Where the colours blend
yet remain in their spectrum
Glorious sights to see,
Then to teach you to be
The thoughts of a thousand years
Laid out in many forms
Where colours and thoughts blend
In a symphony
that you would weep to hear.
I hear you young one
Crying out as if on the side lines
The other team have just scored with a foul
There is much to learn where you can be
On both sides and enjoy to see
Walk with the thoughts of others
then the way they see you there
Then you will be whole again.
I must go I have a journey to make
This is a time not to be late
A journey into my cave again
to regain the peace of inner times
I shall put the kettle on is it two sugars
Don't be long
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Ian thats ur own choosing
I am not accompamying yet
bard is needed here
that any one can bet


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Ain't going anywhere, the cave is a refuge from physical thought.
That there is no Time where I shall be,
it will be but a moment when I see thee lol.
Take care young Bard I have many things to do yet
especially to befuddle your mind for a while,
but most times just make you smile,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

my sole and soul reader
why are all else here off
i wonder

new management or what!


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