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Love my dog more

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2017-06-24 20:36

Love my dog more

Even though
I am a dog lover
lost all/many of them
small puppies variety

now one is a Golden Retriever
presented to me

My, he is so lovingly and big
really loves me

I simply adore him
he nudges me
if he wants anything
and
he knows
he can overpower me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Candlewitch

Sun, 2017-06-25 10:01

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I wish you many happy years with your wonderful new "child". there is much joy to be shared in the years to come. your poem made me smile!

love, Cat

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lovedly

Sun, 2017-06-25 20:38

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I am glad you smiled
did your cats also purr

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Scatterhatter

Sun, 2017-06-25 14:11

'I love my dog as much as I love you'
A line from a Cat Stevens song.
So true
Whilst reading this my dog
Was demanding a belly rub
With a nudge too

Man's best friend eh?

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