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love me will ye

Submitted by loved on Sun, 2013-02-17 03:27

love me will ye

love me like you've loved none other
mother pop sibling,
yes brother sister,
uncle aunts don't figure in today
the world is full of anxiety
if i may that say…

no nephew, niece has any time for you
even if love you gave them too…

so love me today
like you do love your Lord

be he, human
angel or God….

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Frenchf

Sun, 2013-02-17 04:26

They will do so after your write

loved

Sun, 2013-02-17 05:28

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demise f

loved

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BlueDemon77

Sun, 2013-02-17 05:31

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But the poetry is In the gnawing place and would likely force its way from you anyway. I care what people, especially those I respect think of my work. I don't know if it ever goes away. Write not to be loved, love to write and you will find your goal: I've seen you do it before.

Ron

Blue Demon77

"What I want is to be what I was before the knife,
before the brooch pin, before the salve, fixed me in this parenthesis:
Horses fluent in the wind. A place, a time gone out of mind."

The Eye Mote-Sylvia Plath

loved

Sun, 2013-02-17 05:39

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actually i read so many
about 700 friends across the inty
they compose one or two ..then vanish
and i reply poetically
off the cuff ...
its for them more my heart cries
not as much as for myself
hope I do clarify..

loved

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