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Love Lost

Submitted by Buddha on Sat, 2016-01-16 22:18

Empty bed cold heart

only memories remain

 dreams buried alive

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Sun, 2016-01-17 09:47

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Poem. I think its subject make it a senyru. Whatever,
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Buddha

Sun, 2016-01-17 13:58

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Thank you Rula, you are right, the subject is much closer to a Senru than a Haiku, I appreciate your review and your kind words. I am looking forward to reviewing some of yours this evening. Buddha

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lovedly

Sun, 2016-01-17 11:42

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God blessed
Buddha
wisdom still alive

Buddha

Sun, 2016-01-17 13:59

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Thank you as always Lovedly. I can always rely on your reviews. Buddha

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lovedly

Sun, 2016-01-17 19:14

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read those of mine

yet unread by any

Buddha

Sun, 2016-01-17 22:14

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absolutely

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