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Love Letter

an envelope a stamp

paper and a pen

in between the lines

my heart ~

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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now a days 15 Love is not conveyed
by posting letters
O whats app

and cell and laps top
are used to convey
what once was poetry

only now physical one to one
must one love convey
but as of today
maintain 6 feet distance
hide your face with a mask
then all is easy

use your brains
how to convey your love
in your own inimical way
stare into each other's eyes
and beneath the mask smile
then say hi let's walk together a mile
but keep the stick in hand
6 feet long
to distance measure

So no need now
of any love letter
15

i will always love your thoughts

Thank you...Teddy

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are a thing where you can be shy and yet lead with your heart. I can tell, you do both. ~ Geez..
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i was wandering if you were convinced of this work as its such a small one? love letters are indeed the most wonderful way to show your thoughts whome ever you are.

these days though, its all apps!

Thank you...Teddy

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I can still be [convinced], as you say. Especially by such profound thoughts, so succinctly put. ~ Geezer.
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all night or on the other side of the world.
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Thanks so much my friend I really put this for you as a non believer and for Rula who is a huge believer,
It's my pleasure to share with you guys

Thank you...Teddy

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Nice short and succinct verse to be in sync with the title..

Be well..

raj (sublime_ocean)

hello, thank you for your kind words.

Thank you...Teddy

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Hi, Teddy,
I am a big fan of minimalist poetry, and I like this a lot. My favorite part is the (almost all) lack of punctuation and lower case you've used, which visually, is a part of minimalist poetry. Did you intentionally use a capital "I" for "in"? Sweetly simple, but expressive and sincere.
Thank you!
L

thank you for your sweet words and i shall edit the i

very grateful to your eyes,

Thank you...Teddy

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