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Love letter

Submitted by Saint Valz on Fri, 2012-11-16 10:24

Words expressing emotions’
Thoughts put into writing,
Feelings expressed in poetry,
My soul felt on paper.
I’ll write you a love letter

A message delivered in ink,
My heart felt in text,
Securely sealed in an envelope
I’ll write you a love letter

As I reminisce on the moments,
And my heart yearns for your presence,
I won’t forget my promise,
You’re a precious angel of kindness, so
I’ll write you a love letter

I’m hoping u’ll be surprised,
And with an accompanying reaction,
separate your lips and crack a smile,
blink an eye and drop a tear,
take a deep breath and inflate your lungs,
you might skip a heart beat,
when you receive my love letter.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2012-11-16 10:59

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I love a good love poem! I especially enjoyed these lines:

As I reminisce on the moments,
And my heart yearns for your presence,
I won’t forget my promise,
You’re a precious angel of kindness, so
I’ll write you a love letter

only one little problem: a typo in this line:

"I’m hoping u’ll be surprised,"

always, Cat

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Saint Valz

Fri, 2012-12-21 17:01

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Thanks for liking my poem
I'll try revise that line

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