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love em

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2015-09-13 18:58

love em

Don’t miss them

Those whom one loves
are never missed at all
loved so many
who were dear to me
gone with the wind
with some one
never said a word to me
as well done
they blew me away,
never mind
still miss them
have them in mind
till this day
they do or may not, can’t say
they in my memory at least live till today
those whom one loves
can never go away
but when one goes
who can that say?
we must love all living
and
those gone away
we may meet again
some other day

unless they are
ere’’’’’.....
forever gone away
Who can that say...?
so love all, is all that I can say
hope they will return one day
some day

love em

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

alidzain

Mon, 2015-09-14 02:33

alidzain's picture

to love is beautiful,
to cling to love for one who left
can be very stressful.

never turn love to hate
love is the essence of life
but never let it stretch, mate.

before you give love to others,
learn to learn yourself first, I say
always strive to be better.

hiya loved, good poem but I don't really agree with the message unless its about family. Unrequited love can be a real pain, my friend.

Alid

lovedly

Mon, 2015-09-14 13:11

lovedly's picture

we will meet again and again
as long as NEOPOET does remain
and
there are 7.5 billion human
each has his own version
as you do too
ur not fresh
nor for me new

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