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The Lost Muse
So many days have passed by,
many nights have run too.
My pen's idle, my ink's dry,
can't say why or what I'm through.
The sun yet is still bright,
the shining stars and the moon;
I can see a promising light,
would it infuse my muse soon?
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Guess just wanted to say hello dear friends after a long leave.
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Jordan
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themoonman
Tue, 2016-12-27 07:46
Hi Rula,
You've been missed. I hate to say
how much I relate to your poem,
my paper is blank so much of the
time and I can't find my pen.
Terrible to feel lost in the dry.
Rula
Tue, 2016-12-27 12:04
Hello Richard
and many thanks for the read. So bad to hear that you're suffering the same. I keep saying to my self that it's only because I am so busy these days. I have moved to Jordan. New country and a new house. As I said, too busy with new changes. Let's wish it to be just a short time for you and I.
Thank you again.
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author commentCandlewitch
Tue, 2016-12-27 14:47
hello Rula,
I know the condition which you describe...it is a frequent caller to my house. it leaves a person feeling abandoned and lost :(
I hope both you and Richard are soon called upon by your special friend named inspiration. you have done a very good job of expressing this condition! this poem deserves a title.
always, Cat
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Rula
Wed, 2016-12-28 14:42
Dear cat
It makes my heart good to see you active here again. Reading and commenting on this little piece means alot. I also gave it a title as suggested by you dear.
Many thanks.
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author commentCandlewitch
Thu, 2016-12-29 16:39
good title!
thanks for the warm welcome back :)
*hugs, Cat
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Sparrow
Tue, 2016-12-27 17:52
Dear Rula
lovely to read you again though it appears that the paper is blank.
So you are in Jordan now I hope you and yours are well and that the new year will bring you words on gilded wings.
Look forward to more from you soon just ask and the words will flow,
Yours as always Ian. x
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Rula
Wed, 2016-12-28 14:45
dear Ian
Thank you for your kind wishes. I am really grateful!
Hope all is well with you and yours.
Thanks again for reading and commenting.
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author commentEsker
Wed, 2016-12-28 18:34
Hey Rula!
glad to see ur return!
the old missing muses
Like loving the moon
and having overcast
weather forever....
always nice when they
do return once again!
like old friends!
thank U!
Mr Wolf!
Rula
Thu, 2016-12-29 13:52
Thank you
Mr. Wolf. Highly appreciate the warm welcome.
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author commentvalene
Thu, 2016-12-29 19:08
I can relate...
It's a distressing feeling to say the least, when you have the desire to put 'pen to paper,' but the words don't want to cooperate. I did read the previous reviews and being somewhat new to the site, I can tell you have been missed. With that in mind, welcome back. After reading this, it sounds to me as though your muse is returning.
I hope your poetic voice continues to move forward!
valene
Rula
Tue, 2017-02-28 02:23
Hello Valene
Your kind words vo straight deep into my heart.
Hope to read you soon as well and sorry for the late reply.
Greeetings
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author commentjane210660
Mon, 2017-01-16 10:18
Hi Rula
I think we share the same teeshirt, read the same book, saw the same film.
Jxx
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Rula
Tue, 2017-02-28 02:29
Jane
Thank you dear for the visit. Hope you could find a new T-shirt to put on. A one that perfectly fits you [grins]
Seriously, hope to read your new works soooooon
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