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Look into my Eyes..

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2020-12-20 19:03

They have given me time
till Jan 11 2021

then they say
they will look into my eyes
like it or nay
yellow eyes
today
i said don't worry
will use red dye
before you kill me guy
11 JAN
you say

to look into my eyes
even today
young ones die
lol
boy
Don't happiness destroy...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
If you have no humor in life is it then worth living...
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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lovedly

Mon, 2020-12-28 21:02

lovedly's picture

all has iced
where to go
the poems now don't naturally flow
from here
lovedly
will also go
unless it does lesser snow
and neopoets stream as ever does flow
here we go

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