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LONELY NIGHTINGALE SINGS TONIGHT

When one is alone
it's only then
one feels really lonely
all alone

time weighs heavy
how to pass it by
when alone miserably

O poet you are not
the only one all alone
we most of us similarly moan
wish that you no more
stay alone

get a sweeter one
to jingle with thee
thy lips
eyes
memory
soul deep within

may we all pray too
none in this world is left
like you
singularly alone

lovely poem you composed
see I kept my promise
returned
your poem now has a friend
in me earned

o poet you will never ever
again feel
ALONE

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

written something that touches a heart full of lonely. My only criticism is that the last line of verse four should be [within], not broken into two parts. Good work! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

THANKS FOR THE TYPO also...

author comment

your poem rings true. no one wants to be lonely. but some think that they want to be left alone. what they really want is the relief from pain. an excellent poem my friend!

*hugs, Cat

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Thank you so much for your lovely excellence
It thrills ones heart when a poem is filled with appreciation.

I just read Steve's romantic poem
What a lovely Piscean you must be
speaks he in his Romantic brief.

Please congratulate him
Not every wife is a
ROSE.

author comment

I did as you requested, and he smiled ;)

*love & hugs, Cat

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IN SILENCE
DO thank him
he's a gentleman

author comment

I just told him what you said, he thanks you and says that you are very welcome!

*hugs, Cat & Steve

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Cats Piscean friend
and Steve is?

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Steve is a Gemini

*hugs, Cat

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dual to a dual sign match
pisces saggys geminis and virgoes
r dual signs
one each earth water air and fire triangles
you very well know know

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keeps my boat afloat! he is very kind and loving. sometimes I think I don't deserve him.

*hugs, Dat

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Cats lucky Geminis r intelligent

they know
what why and when

ask him

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