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Live On Till Switch is On

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2020-09-26 20:37

No need to apologize
I know oldies are read
but by minuscule few
we all have passed our teens
also in poetry .

Stay well

a guy told me and my mom
I'd die when I'm. 13
now I'm a bit out of reach @81+++plus

but still don't know
when I will catch the last bus
or miss my final flight
yet finally drown
in the river flowing by
where I live

I can't swim
lol
life I take it as humourly
(fun)
that's how I have lived on

may touch 89
sorry 99
so smile with me
lady

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Breakinglogic

Sun, 2020-09-27 02:34

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Lovedly,
when I have time I like to peruse the oldies:)
I saw this as a comment on another poem of yours. I wanted to just say Please enjoy your river from a safe distance.

☆ raffy

Geezer

Sun, 2020-09-27 06:43

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Lovedly. You won't ever drown, because you float so well. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sun, 2020-09-27 11:29

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how well you know me so I'm haappp peee
will keep floating like ye

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