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little light house

You and me sitting
in our
lovely little light
House staring
At the streams
Of dreams bellow
Wondering
What our light’s of life
Will Show
In the Delphic
Fog of
Our future bellow.

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This is lovely, you show such beauty when you give your words pride.
Well presented

Don't stare too long, we can never see the future only the past.

Thank you...Teddy

I hope your doing fine in this time of mass hysteria

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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This poem is just beautiful. I look at this and imagine a person staring into the waters below the lighthouse thinking of their future. Amazing! I look forward to seeing more.

Vivi
(Love hanging with my family of poets)

Thank you

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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