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A Little Glitch...
Damn, you little glitch
You certainly are a bitch
Threw my stuff all in the ditch
All for reason of which?
I know that you don't care
After my soul's all bare
Just fling my stuff anywhere
I look and it's not there
I so wish you would expire
Are you still in my wire?
With whom do you conspire?
Tell me who to fire
So, damn you little glitch
I really have an itch
To find out which is which
This really is a bitch
Style / type:
Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
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raj
Tue, 2020-08-11 07:37
Hi Geezer
you really made a poem out of the glitch experienced by Gracy...:)
raj (sublime_ocean)
Geezer
Tue, 2020-08-11 07:44
Yes...
I thought it would be of interest and a little fun, thanks for stopping by.
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author commentCandlewitch
Tue, 2020-08-11 07:50
hey Geezer,
i love it...you made a pithy poem out of a frustrational irritation! good work! and it flows beautifully, too.
*hugs, Cat
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Teddy15
Tue, 2020-08-11 09:34
Dear Geezer
lol that's great, you made a glitch into a bitch , the other day I left I think around 10 of the same comment on poor Raj's poem I was so embarrassed of course he was more than kind but I was sertainly having a glitch myself, sometimes these things happen. I am more than useless on computers so with extra problems I often feel like chucking it all in the bin. You have taken an annoying moment and put your usual comedy spin making your reader laugh.
Thank you...Teddy
c lynn brooks
Tue, 2020-08-11 10:18
Gee
now that is pure frustration right there
yup all over a little glitch
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scribbler
Tue, 2020-08-11 10:48
Hi Gee
Those little glitches can drive a person to cuss lol. Stanza3 line 2 try "are you still in my wire" and see what you think.
Geezer
Tue, 2020-08-11 12:34
Thabnks for...
that little suggestion; it does make it better. ~ Gee.
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author commentGracy
Tue, 2020-08-11 10:57
Hello Geez, you've made a
Hello Geez, you've made a highly funny poem out of my annoying glitch. Always a resourcefull poet. The title, content, rhyming are all perfect. Also the first lines and the last.
Enjoyed every bit, Gracy
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