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Liquefy

Submitted by lou on Thu, 2011-01-06 05:48

Breathe and liquefy,
lay aside your pain.
Beauty emerges.

lethargy, inertia, apathy
Blood red vision.
Inhale.

The world vibrates.
Thoughts throb and agitate.
Creativity is my addiction.

inhale and the old world goes away.

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lou

Thu, 2011-01-06 15:35

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Thanks

Love Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Fri, 2015-01-02 14:59

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