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lips divine modernised

Submitted by loved on Mon, 2012-06-11 05:51

The kiss,
lips are divine
they are fine
but none on this earth
can lips
of my kind
ever find

I wear no mask
for I love the task
just kiss me
like a fairy
and see
how love flows
from my lips to glee
this kiss was lovely
didn’t you see?

a sweet lovers kiss
is absolutely free

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Tue, 2012-06-26 09:50

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a soppy love of kissing and being with love, Loved it, just for its childlike expression, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Tue, 2012-06-26 15:19

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to be a child
how so ever sloppy
part of humour in life
glad you didn't have to wipe..

loved

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Esker

Wed, 2012-06-27 22:16

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"The Kiss"
was Art Noveau style at the turn of the century Loved

I hear the yearning in your poems the earnest
desire enriched in your style
and how many walk about this way
like a wave crest seeking
restless and unabated
Fill your poetry with want Loved
and I shall read
you are alive my Poet friend

feeling desiring describing

You are open Not flippy faced
like the reality here in my city
Smiles today and jilt you the next

I read you and throw you comments

loved

Thu, 2012-06-28 00:43

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''''Fill your poetry with want Loved
and I shall read
you are alive ..................................still or yet?
my Poet friend.....................

kindly do read Ifan,
my dear Esker

loved

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