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Limericks 1 and 2

Submitted by Tam the Chanter on Sat, 2011-12-31 12:07

Limerick 1

This Limerick isn't much good,
For I'm writing, but not in the mood.
My Muse sneaked off home,
Leaving me on my own,
So these lines are not clever, but crude.

Limerick 2

Empty bottle of Malt hits the floor
Soon I slide down beside with a snore
When I wake up I say
"No more drinking today!"
To my Pink Elephant at the door

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Happy New Year
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Roscoe Lane

Tue, 2012-01-03 18:27

Roscoe Lane's picture

Happy new year to you, and a wee word, lay aff the sauce. There's only so many pink elephants to go roon. great fun. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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