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Life's whole Truth

Life's Truth
You have penned the truth
the whole truth
but be aware
there is no nudity

you came that way and go the same
then you were small
now a bit big

wisdom you leave behind

but of soul I can't vouch
you were magnetic living no doubt
now you lose your magnetism
without an iota of doubt

you didn't know then
nor did you before
where from magnetism shrouded you
when alive
now no more
all is earthed!

all hurry not for you
but they with their own lives have to continue
you keep yourself safe and clean
till magnetism in your face is seen
then we will all be the same
you and l
as we side by side lie
as in lay!
as clay!

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Life's truths will be shown to you one day
There in the quiet of life where all paths meet you will know.
Be kind to yourself, that others know you, and of you.
Then in the blink of an eye you will join like Spirits in their place.
The walk to that place is so special it will be more than you think.
A poem of a truth is now shown to you that you may think.
Still be kind to you, as a thought is for ever,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

spirit of man should live on earth tis bliss
in heaven a total amiss
just believe it...or THIS!

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