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Life's song

Submitted by raj on Fri, 2018-05-04 16:13

write a song no matter its form
sing it the way you want
what you want is what you get
sing it till the last breath

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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lovedly

Fri, 2018-05-04 17:39

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raj
do you sing

I used to
till one day my ma'am in school told me
now shut up!
donkeys start braying
when they hear you
singing

I was silenced really ..
then my other Math's guy told me
laugh and the world will laugh with thee
weep and you weep lonely..

ever since I laugh daily
now they ask me
are you okay
actually....

raj

Sat, 2018-05-05 04:37

for taking time to read and comment.
................................................................

raj (sublime_ocean)

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