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liberation

liberation

aching carbon corpus
humiliating adventure --
diaphanated alarm

discovering humiliation
to be first step --
on path to liberation.

vcp

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments

Knocks our sails out for awhile, eh?

Humble pie is good. Food for thought (and the soul).

Kicks in the brain cells to make new neural connections.

;-)

Indeed! Right you are.

Grazie molto

"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."

Unknown (at least to me)

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