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Let Me Dream

All these years
I have remained silent
standing below all those hills
I could have climbed
but for many a miss

no bliss
no kiss
only guys took me amiss

Can't climb a simple hill
then be prepared
time will kill

we set you off on a train to win
Sad you are getting late
no win win
have wine or rum and gin
you shall never in this life
a Nobel ever win

A fresh life now you are about to begin
what will you do with the prize
even if it was flung at you

Do not be dim
heavens alone now will you trim
your mind has now gone numb
no more poems
can anyone for you now plumb

Sad couldn't say well done
Bye my Neo's son
you are now over eighty one

there lies in you no sin
but let's even now begin
jamming over the din
aged poet you are getting late
now for a NOBEL
with traces of hope never wait

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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As one nears the estuary life seeps in slowly the ocean is magnanimous welcomes thee lovedly
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you would win. You wouldn't live to brag about it, you would have a heart attack! Be sure that we will all talk about you, long after you are gone. You are famous, even now. ~ Gee.
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Gee perhaps you don't know
They might still give me THE BEST JOKER of the years prize
And you should be aware the strongest portion of my body next to the brain is my loving heart
I distribute to you all lovingly/LOVEDLY
and freely
It will never stop even if I die they will have to stop it ////so don't worry I will not die of a heart attack ///but my brain may die and not distribute blood to the other organs the body does employ
I am also a bacterial TOY
In any case my NOBEL PRIZE WILL GO TO ALL WORLD'S CANCER PATIENTS
NOW YOU ARE worried about COVID
Tho' TB still exists ////CANCER WILL be the only humanity's bliss
every soul one day it will kiss
don't take me a amiss
life alone is BLISS

KEEP THE NOBEL
As you rightly say ///of what use is 'tis it
lol GEE
remain friendly come along with me// if you need company/// I am used to
LONELINESS
YOU AREN'T
Amen

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My chatroom is taking a break
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to talk about, contact me and we can discuss it
Thank you for your participation.
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but Alan
now compose a poem on me
from an invisible sperm
trying to be a tall
Eucalyptus tree
keep my humour alive
I am 81 plus
but not about yet to die
this year's NOBEL has gone by
next year they may save
giving a NOBLE
to a human poetic slave
may be B R A V E
friend Alan

Thank NEO'S ya'll '
we have b'come freinds
after all

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Your tunneling poemy
compares well with me
LIFE is like a flowing river
and
the river flows through a dense forest
half the time you are entering into darkness
then you gradually come out
in search of light
it symbolizes the brightness
which only now you realize
grief is lost inside the tunnel
and
dissolves in the river
we call life..

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Is the feeling I get from this one. Was that your intent?

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Is the feeling I get from this one. Was that your intent?

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as simple as Covid ---universally
and
Time is the panacea
it alone can
KILL
hill bill and jill

thanks for the medal
LONG TENDERER OF NEO
since Jess did go

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