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Legend Laid to Rest

Submitted by lovedly on Mon, 2018-02-26 07:14

What will happen
when
None know

So let life flow
and
as it does
glow
be ready also
any time it may go

Legends are the seeds of time
Some emerge
others submerge
it's all in one's destiny.

Hope the legend....
this one
does sustain
as others would love her
to remain
Amen!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

chevyvent

Mon, 2018-02-26 18:47

chevyvent's picture

Hope the legend stands out it really makes you think of life. We are filled with kings and queens its heaven or hell. Each day that passes each day I reflect upon this wonderful piece. You have inspired me to keep writing you have rich unique talent as a poet. Thank you for the unique opportunity to read your terrific work.

Mario Vitale

lovedly

Tue, 2018-02-27 01:47

lovedly's picture

MV for your appreciation
Thanks

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