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Late Night Munchies

Been in this meeting now three hours.
Where do the managers get these powers?
My gut has been growling.
From inside a howling.

There’s a pan on the stove for cleaning,
with a skim of fat from this morning.
Washing dishes at two O’clock I’m in a jamb.
She was some kind of white widow - helped grab the PAM

Never cooked much but this double egg and Swiss on white
she delivered to me at the height.
It was a dream came and went so fast that night,
but I’ll always recall how she waved that can.

Twist and shout she was all about,
now it’s time to shut my mouth.

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

had to stop by and see if that little white widow was still in residence? Sounds like she cooks a mean egg-sandwich! I liked this as it gave me a chance to peep in the window of someone else. The rhyming is good and consistent. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

it is a good tale and fantasy,(?)
in this line: but I’ll always (recalled) how she waved that can (recall)
your posting thrills the imagination with mental pictures! favorite lines are:

Never cooked much but this double egg and Swiss on white
she delivered to me at the height.
It was a dream came and went so fast that night,
but I’ll always recalled how she waved that can

*hugs, Cat

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i am glad I could help! you have a great day!

*hugs, (the) Cat

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