you shouldn't just assume that we (the reader) have read the same book, watched the same movie or television show. I don't know who these people are that you mentioned. perhaps you should give us a clue by filling out the proper space before you hit the enter button. I get the idea this has something to do with vampires?

always, Cat

vampires! I have read a couple of the books and seen one of the movies. "Twilight" I wasn't too interested in them, as I took them to be something for the tweens and younger set, but since then, I have had occasion to see advertisements on TV for another movie which I will probably watch. I see by the shortness and quick ending, that you were in a hurry to post. I understand. I would take the time to finish this a little more. It is always a thrill to post and see what people think of your work, but sometimes it's better to work on it a bit more to get the ending right. [Not that it wasn't right], just that it seems hurried].
Keep up the good work and keep writing, I'm anxious to see what you can do. ~ Geezer.
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a literal masterpiece omfg. i love you mermaid master you've done it again!!!!