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The last sojourn… your journey

The last sojourn… your journey
You can think alone when times train …or spacecraft…takes you there …your final destination arrives ….reaching ones destination is not always as exciting…. as is the sojourn ….your journey ….alone you have by now...through tunnels of time have gone… and sad enough to say …though you have alone found your way… there will be no one …no Baldie …nor Godly …no kith …nor kin … no fat one …nor thin … no damsel …no damned guy …all would have already wished you a very happy forever goodbye… you shall alight at the junction of eternity…where there will be no fraternity…. only your own God implanted in imagination …a SPIRITUALITY …which shall help you to lean upon… if your minds imaginary skeleton is still strong…. ..all interred in the bon -fires here …go it alone my very friendly dear…. There will be… neither omen …nor Amen….. well tis all left in the garbage of actuality bins out here…with my truthful sayings… friend do kindly adhere… I will also be fairly near… but there too I will not …ever you hear…

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I have replied to this one on the comments to your poem of your Mom.
I shall repeat the reply under here:-

Young Bard

We will think therefore we will be.
Alone or not those figures we see
Yours to you, in that great eternity
Mine to me, as even as yours, shall be.

We will both go gladly this sojourn
That is in the company of many.
Let us not fear that this time of ours
Where our last thoughts may be.

Hello! is this the station to eternity.

Those ones that walk and talk to me,
shall I deem myself so very mad
that these thoughts are so wrong
Even their God has forsaken them.

Will you promise me that in eternity
Should there be a place for you and me
That you will at least call my name
Call, Alexander, Ian.T, Yenti or Sparrow.

These names are all the same..

If all is well, I shall hear you and think with you again.
Yours, all of the above and the children.

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

you are incredibly marvelous


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