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Last Night

Every time
I feel it's last night

they help me with
sea dishes
full of delight

my system packs up
ere its sunlight

I ask myself
where has it gone

what
Last Night

take delight me is still
A
L
I
V
E

for another
LAST
NIGHT

no rage
no fright
it may again
not be my last
what
damn
night

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Free verse
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Edna
Poetess to the Stars

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