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Last day of May 2018

Nature’s gifts

A new day is born
plants have newer leaves
spring had sprung
now will bring fresher seeds

and apples and oranges and watermelons and pineapples,
yes pears
plenty of bananas

all just nature’sgifts free
but men will en-cash it all,
do see

so behind your houses
in the lawns plant guava trees

be happy it’s a sweet drink
and also for the mind
a nourishing ink

be happy
that's all one can say today
it's the last day of May

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Free verse
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This is pretty good, loaded with conceptual metaphors. Arraigned in soft tones and good rhythm.

Nature’s gifts

A new day is born
plants have newer leaves
spring had sprung
now will bring fresher seeds
...a new day is born launches us into another Month and shall definitely usher in good things to us.

A fantastic poem is born here! I enjoyed the diction's of the poet.

Ibe Frederick

and thanks for ur maiden read

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This is pretty good, loaded with conceptual metaphors. Arraigned in soft tones and good rhythm.

Nature’s gifts

A new day is born
plants have newer leaves
spring had sprung
now will bring fresher seeds
...a new day is born launches us into another Month and shall definitely usher in good things to us.

A fantastic poem is born here! I enjoyed the diction's of the poet.

Ibe Frederick

I loved this one.
It was so beautiful and sweet.
Everything flowed very well and the imagery was a joy to read.
As always, a wonderful job.
What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the discreption are all so wonderful! This has to be one of the best love poems I have read. Take care
this poem was so sweet. I loved the descriptions. It was a very well written poem. You are one of the few writers that rhymes the way you do in such an eloquent way. wonderful write!

Mario Vitale

.....you are one of the
few writers
that rhymes
the way you do
in such an
eloquent way.
wonderful write!

and MV
I again thank you
too....

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