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Landscape O Mine ... 1000 WORDS POETRY CONTEST

Landscape O Mine

I'm now no more
but a mere shadow
on the screen of time's memory
many still come to my gallery
I see

some smile
some look at me in awe
the landscape is a sure memory
of that cloudy evening
dark,
yet so wonderfully
brought the distant
silhouette
'twas a real sight
I painted it all day
and
all that night
can you evaluate
my anxiety

I wanted to catch every stroke
the clouds pointed at me
now for me also it is a
distant unforgotten memory
come bring back
my landscape to me
I'd love to here in heaven see
the river still beckons me ...

where did you find my painting
in which gallery
come
show me

who all still remember that ghastly night
I converted all of it into live poetic canvas
where were you
do come and say
did you love my work
until this day

I still hanker to be loved
I pray
come show me your heart
just for just one day

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

A very good write on Landscapes giving the broader aspect of many paintings.
An unusual write for you but keep up the clean lines of your poetry in all forms..
Take care,
Yours, Ian..

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

painted sparrow
Ian s it you anew

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It was so Cheep, but so glad you like it, please send bird seed for me,
Yours, Sparrow

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

or to more seed
which
must be specific

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three in one
you alone have read it
yet!

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on another site this one got a SILVER TROPHY

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I can only stand in envy. This contest was so difficult for me that I could never choose a painting to write about and thus to my shame didn't write anything at all. Perhaps I should have done like you and just written of an entire genre instead. .......stan

I can only stand in envy. This contest was so difficult for me that I could never choose a painting to write about and thus to my shame didn't write anything at all. Perhaps I should have done like you and just written of an entire genre instead. .......stan

I can only stand in envy. This contest was so difficult for me that I could never choose a painting to write about and thus to my shame didn't write anything at all. Perhaps I should have done like you and just written of an entire genre instead. .......stan

thanks three times Stan
you are the only poetic true man
whom we all understand

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you are always begging for comments so there are three lol

I never begged

people who love me
have always read

I never begged
nor ever hankered
all artists
want to be known
even reader now you

seven sites I work on
stan
so many read
now I will take a
HOLIDAY
from Neopoets
for a month

till you have
Lovedly totally forgotten..
then I perhaps could come
if you had of my absence
silent fun

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