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L O L H U M O R

YOU ALL MUST BY NOW KNOW
SO MANY poems you do miss on purpose

But when I compose a poem
I DON'T KNOW
WHETHER I AM A MAN OR WOMAN

I cover all human
all like vision
like desire
all need warmth and fire
I can't fulfill everyone's desire
so poetry salvos
I freely fire
some see me nude
some imagine
am I crude
not rude or too prude

still I love you
the bikini was borrowed
you know
inner wears
I don't wear also
BEING RETIRED AND AGED
I STAY ALL DAY AT HOME
NOW SHIFTING TO ROME
VENICE THEY SAY
IS A LOVELY PLACE TO ROAM
LIKE AT HOME

DID YOU NOT KNOW...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I could have done without the naked loved visual lol

Watch out then for the Carabinieri, they really would arrest naked ones if they certainly ran around without clothes on. Apparently you are only allowed to be naked on TV...lol
Rome and Venice are quite far apart so decide. LoL but please bring a robe.

Thank you...Teddy

All wear
ONLY ROBES.
and drop 'em often..

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however the last lines are IMHO abrupt. I like the humor. Being retired, and no longer needing to wear the scrubs, or come home with blood on my shoes... i like the "The Bikini was borrowed." I wonder if using Speedos somewhere would work ....
Like
"Shifting to Rome in speedos"
or something like that...

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shall tomorrow
when another humour
I borrow

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