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L and L

love and lust
the purpose of life
what is
procreation
for some
is just lust
for most
and love
for those
dreaming of idealism

lust is simple evacuation
where as love is injection
take it or leave it

love is permanent
lust is like infatuation
impermanent!

lust is like dew
and
love is the draft
that draws the dew

so everlasting is actually love
but
youth needs more of lust than love
apart from the mother’s bosom

be one a son or a boy...

I compare not mom's love
that is so serene

all that here I mean
is love and sex
and
lust and love
all mixed in between,
the curry of joy and fascination
lust is consummation
love pure and simple imagination.

hope you shall be able to decipher,
which ever you prefer
love or lust

both together or either

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Free verse
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sorry loved,
I'm just getting back into the game and I happ'd to read this, which really says nothing new in no interesting way.

I'll make amends right now by scanning some of your other recent works to try and find the jewels I know you are capable of.

cheers,
Jess
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loved

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