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kissme a trillion

Kiss me a trillion

How I wish I knew you
no one kisses me too
as my mouth stinks
and am toothless
my spouse fears
gums disease
so she feels

So I kiss all my fans
through the medium
of Internet
come and enjoy with me
kisses I give for free
don't worry
I love Frenchy

and

whilst others read this piece
I assure you
all over you will be wet
as I kiss all of you
and
as others await a kiss or two

O not from me but you

so I kiss you good bye
ere my kisses fly high
up in the sky
as the Autumn leaves
all have said goodbye
never mind
there is still a leaf or two
waiting to carry
my kiss up to you

But to my spouse
I am grateful
I have turned
a world kisser poet

all read my kisses poems
and fly kisses to me
how they wish I was with them

so silently they sigh
poet when you come
do say Hi
and
kiss me a lullaby...

So see
how lucky I am
and I do

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Your poem speaks of emotion and lonelyness to me, easy to follow and well constructed.

loneliness yes
but not aloneness
kisses are given
only by loved ones
the heart yearns for more
many just can't adore
that's why poets are for
what else
who will love em more
unless their love
out to the world they pour
your poetry helps me for sure
some one will hear me
and
take me ashore
where we may love
each other much more
till then kindly endure

author comment

All artists are lovers first...
they kiss....
never miss

Pierce
then tear the canvas
gals in tears

he fixes her soul
solely
on silk only
nothing to unveil all is shown
revealing the camouflaged
hole and sole
the whole
where he loved it most

then only will others peel
and
the love of the ardent artist feel
ask the gal of Titanic
how she felt it
once only!
ere the sinking of the ship
became an everlasting memory

so be it...

author comment

have i been breathing here breatlessly

author comment
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