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KISMEE AND MY ARMS

Submitted by loved on Fri, 2011-01-14 12:51

Into My Arms
I saw myself embraced
In your arms last night,
Twas in my dream
But now I feel
The warmth of the embrace
Let it stay
Come out of those memories to play
For dreams come to die away
But in life
In our arms place
Love alone,
For ever we do trace.

Kiss me again
Kiss me again
Like last night’s dream
I had a fall you know,
Kiss me the same way
During day
As my life
In your softness ebbs away

Kiss me for ever
The lips touch may
Be as silky
As the cashmere silk
And
In my eyes
Let the kiss touch
The softness
Of which
I’m in search.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

loved

Fri, 2011-01-14 17:57

loved's picture

Ma'am

I don't plan
i simply write like the
MOVING FINGER AND MOVE ON

friends like u tell me
when i'm wrong
and those who don't read me
aren't strong
they to a class
of their own do belong
am i wrong?

loved

author comment

Esker

Fri, 2011-01-14 13:34

Esker's picture

something soft and kind
and alluring

"I had a fall"

this read is mysterious
and makes me stop
I like it in its flow

its considerations
and leads

Thank You

loved

Mon, 2011-01-17 22:13

loved's picture

This is the one i read
your first kind comment
and I wished to thank you

loved

author comment

raj

Fri, 2011-01-14 14:02

i loved the ebb and flow of this poem and ofcourse its essence too....

raj (sublime_ocean)

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