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Kindness of the Unknown

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2015-10-18 23:19

Kindness of the unknown

It's all kindness of the unknown...
human
who helps one...
to help another...
such a one are you...
my friends all
my destiny
in wilderness
lies destiny
where is she
standing
hiding
climbing
swimming or flying
in the blue skies
where is she behind forest trees
asking me
ask my dear
your destiny
then only come to me

you make us rely
on destiny
we will be on our haunches
till eternity
so fly as these birds do
kindness of the unknown

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Geremia

Sat, 2015-10-24 09:21

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ypur poetry has become heartfelt and more ""musical"" Bravo., my friend

joe

lovedly

Sat, 2015-10-24 11:39

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as u also uplift
as much as I do
I am always with you
what a pleasure
Joe
to know you

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Geremia

Sat, 2015-10-24 11:47

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And I you :)

lovedly

Sat, 2015-10-24 19:46

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what a pleasure
it would have been
if we each other
had seen

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