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I am wasting my time

I am losing my mind.

I threw them all behind,

I have murdered the crime.

I am shaming myself

Laugh it out laugh it out laugh it out

You are shaming me

So I lower my head and beg

And when your judgments speak to my face,

They write ugly letters I can't erase

And when I let myself be heard,

All my words just crash down and burn

Make sure you keep it in your head,

all the dirty words you said

And eat them one by one...

by the time I'm gone

When it comes chasing you ten times heavier now...

You will run

you will hide

you will think of suicide.

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Remind me now and then not to upset you, LOL
In your lifes journey, you will find these things like boulders or even irritating small stones that are on your pathway.
Just walk around those big ones, and kick hell out of those small ones.
There is nothing in this world or anyone that can make you more than what you are, except that spirit there inside and all that does is gathers the good things of this life.
Take care and we are many and we will always be here, sometimes in a different name but the good ones will be there for you, all you need to do is learn to see them, Yours Ian.T
PS:- and the piece you wrote is very good there will be others to assist with the write I am sure....

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

And when your judgments speak to my face,

creation built on truth

thank you for bringing light to the closet
many of us suffocate in


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