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Juvenilia

"Pow! Wham! Splat!
take that!
you irreconsillable twat!"

our irascible superhero
slams out mind altering tweets
on his raggedy old Mac
from his mother's
cluttered
boy-cave basement
while flaunting
grievous misspellings
and an intuitive contempt
for punctuation

"zap! boom! slam!
you crusty old bitch"

another takedown
will she ever recover?
NO!
down and out
another deleted account

known to the webby world as
TrollingMeisterman
he stuns his prey
with super-duper
out of this world
"to the moon, Alice"
obnoxiousness

He is undoubtedly
the most fun one can have
when surfing
this tedious medium of
self-righteous discourse.

But hardly anyone else admits it

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You mischievous imp you.
Made me smile, which brightened up my day.
Jx

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Al

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how sad that is lost to the vast majority of the readers here. You might want to put a footnote to it.

i particularity like

this tedious medium of
self-righteous discourse.

(tedious, of course, other than the Neopoet site!)

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

to those that don't know , GOOGLE IT
that was for whomever reads this after you
I'm surprised that people don't use google for phrases, and slang and virtually everything that they are not sure of. I've never, to my recollection, not found something I searched for.
It is truly remarkable.
And it's right at ones fingertips if one comes across something while on the computer...your already on the computer. Open a window, enter the question, click the mouse. Voila! instant answers

I'm not speaking right now to you Mark, I am venting
I've had this conversation so many times before

anyway,

Al

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