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Just For Tonight

Put on soft music, turn down the light
for we are together and alone tonight.
Close the curtains, unplug the phone
just for tonight, lets stay alone.
Come up close, so I can see
there in your eyes, your love for me.
Let my lips caress your face
while we share a warm embrace.
Kiss me tenderly the time is right
for we are together and alone tonight.
Take my hand and lead me to
where I can give my love to you.
Hold your body, close to mine
just for tonight let’s make the time.
Set the passion in you free
as you give your love to me.
Stay in my arms, all through the night
for we are together and alone tonight.

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the lyric influence very strongly here. Your rhyming is perfect, and I think that the only thing that this needs, is to have a chorus, music, and a good deep bass voice to sing it! I can almost hear someone like Jim Reeves singing something like this. Great work! ~ Geezer

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Thanks for a great comment, don't suppose you can sing can you!?
take care,
Tim

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