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Just one more night…..

Just one more night,
you have just come and so late
we haven't had enough fun as yet,
why do you want to go away,
do stay

another sweet session will end up
better than as best
do stay...
Ah do stay
Okay
just another night will relieve our very being
just a night more my love,
can you not stay

what am I asking of you
just a night of your life’s day
only for today
yes my loved one,
do please ,do stay...

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Free verse
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Good write, really like this one,
Tim

Timbo for your maiden comment

loved

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Nice imagery, sweet! and romantic - I could just imagine these words being said on bended knees - the speakers voice being urgent and full of passionate pleading!

You've done a good job here Loved! Keep up the good work.

Love Mand xxxxxx

Mand ...you just can't imagine
how much it...ur words means to me
I composed this one
as all others just watching the background of the YouTube music

Thanks a million

loved

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