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just Lovely eyes

Beauty in your eyes
When I see the beauty
in your eyes
I get a glimpse of
my own eyes
as one gets a reflection
in a mirror
I see myself
in yours

but eyes never lie
you stay within my eye
let all wonder
who is who
whose eye are you

when you die
donate your eye
you have the world's best ones
as though I was ever to go blind

Love I shall find
once again
when I see my self
all over and again
in our eyes
a mirror for ever
thy loving eyes....

O what a lovely record fifty poems not read at all over a year no! why compose more what for

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Free verse
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My eyes enjoyed this poem greatly.
I found it to be very cute and precious and... lovely.

Thank you, friend.

this is being lying here
in Neopoet
as if twas in heaven
three years
you give life and eyes to it
in seven minutes

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