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JOURNEY ON NEO'S FOLKS

We all will never ever meet
but you all are as ever astounding
families’ owe to you its founding

life is just a forgotten lousy journey
no one knows what is next in coming
keep humming
life is like a dream
so does it seem
yet we all hope to meet
on the other side of the hill

WHICH ONE

No one knows still
there are no hills
Bills Jills Pills
thrills drills and grills
behind us or later
about our long nose
we all happily suppose

take care life is just a
granted lovely happy journey
ticket less both ways

So be happy you saved your hardly earned dollars safely
others may consume it much more comfortably/betterly

if they all do survive coronaically
still be happy life is just not a lousy journey
yes it’s pleasant beautifully and lovely

live like a King or Queen
but never to anyone be mean

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Comments

I think you are saying that life can be a dream, but watch out for the bumps in the road? The comment about others spending your hard-earned money after you have passed from this life, makes me think that you wish that you had spent more on yourself and left less for others to spend? At any rate, I love that you hope to meet all of us Neos. in the after-life. If there is one, I'm sure that we will meet.~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

you keep countering me Gee
I have never said believe only in me
you maintain your belief

I have not seen any in my real life reborn
yes many humans have lots of similarity
that makes up for future stats
keeps everyone dangling
'
maintain hopes
jess and Ian snow and moonman
must be waiting
now for me

please apprise of
GATE NUMBER '

1 12 3 or 9
early]

GEE

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