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The journey of life

Submitted by Edward nigma on Fri, 2020-09-25 08:57

Life is only the journey
from which we as a
purpose seeking society embark on
and from there I see only one path
the path in which we venture
into the unknown realm of
death and finally face our
fear of the enigma.

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lovedly

Fri, 2020-09-25 13:18

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Life is only a journey
from which we
as a purpose seeking society
embark on
from there
I see only one path
that in which we venture
into the unknown realms
of death
finally to face our fear
of impending enigma

I hope you will like it ....you are a man ///young one with courage
lovedly

Edward nigma

Fri, 2020-09-25 14:22

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I hope your doing fine in this time of mass hysteria

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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c lynn brooks

Sat, 2020-09-26 18:58

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again I might suggest stanzas easier to read you may get even more reviews of your work

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Edward nigma

Sat, 2020-09-26 19:06

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I don’t know how to use stanzas or I don’t understand stanzas
Anyways I hope your doing well in this time of mass hysteria that plagues our populous

Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.

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