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Journey On...

We remember, we remember
But, we will not ever understand
The truth that took you from us
Stunned by our loss
Try as we might
Numb from the fact
We cannot fathom the purpose

Stars should shine brightly

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Free verse
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we will all miss that ornery elf. RIP Jess

to jess
am confused
why RIP

I too composed
a similar one just now
can't post it
wait 23 hours only

weirdelf I cannot believe you are gone why we just did a workshop together one never knows what fate has in store. To say you will be missed is an understatement You will always be remembered. Why now you and Lon can carry on those heated debates

Let your mercy spill on all those
burning hearts in hell( L.Cohen)

..but are you saying that Weirdelf (Jess) has died?

Poet(ess) to the Stars

that is correct. We have no details, other than he died on the 11th.
~ Geezer.

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author comment

...very saddened to hear this. He was in contact with me on the 9th, so it must have been sudden.

Poet(ess) to the Stars

cancer took him from us

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