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Japanese Poetry
haiku
Tundra
a barren tundra
far far away from it all
there is nothing here
Ass
unmovable ass
push tug this mule will not budge
kindly check its load
I will add more styles as I learn them
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Comments
IKnowNoBox
Wed, 2012-07-11 13:40
Tanka (Acrostic)
Cocaine to me brain
Relief from fucking caring
a welcome numbness
craving one more hit
knowing it was killing me
author commentIan.T
Wed, 2012-07-11 18:08
Iknb
Your Haiku is more of a Senyru as the Haiku is of the seasons the others come under the title of Senyru.
The Haiku is more like a blessing to the seasons in a set 5-7-5 syllable set.
Have a look at the numerous writes on both forms there are on site and join us in Barbara's workshop I think you will be very welcome.
The Tanka out of my field and verbal use but a very good one lol, there are many words I know but try to never use, Yours Ian.T
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weirdelf
Wed, 2012-07-11 21:40
great to see you man
nice pieces,
check out Barbara's workshop on Japanese forms at
http://www.neopoet.com/workshop/working-japanese-poetry
we're doing a collaborative write, a renga, it's fun.
cheers,
Jess
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