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It's hard to breathe

It's hard to breathe
When she
Does that thing
With her tongue and her thigh
At the same time.

Feel like gravity
Got away from me

It’s hard to breathe when I
With a sigh
And say “higher, harder”
And she does.
And I...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Content level: 
Explicit Content


this very suggestive piece is new and fresh and exciting! (without being obscene) I like it very much. I usually pick out my favorite lines of a poem, but I would not break this poem up as I loved the whole thing! very imaginative! I would gladly read more of your poetry...I will look for them in the "stream"

*hugs, Cat

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