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is it our mistakes?

the world of today is strange
it seems okay for lovers to have no trust
the public cares more about tomorrow than today
its okay to keep secrets from those you love
life has a different mean from the old

the youth is social
elders have cursed the generation
the same generation they gave birth to

being a parent has became ordinary
mother earth has more children than adults
who are we to blame?
mother earth is not proud of us

respect has been destroyed
lust and love are now the same
fame has demolished reality
what went wrong?

churches have lost members
clubs are now trending with elders
schools seem to be expressing crime
education is now a business
OH LORD what is our greatest sin?

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