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To IRiz (the lady of Sunku)

Iris
Royalty
Faith and valor

Iris
The Heaven's
Bridge to the Earth

Iris
A lady
In Sunku form

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A dedication to (Iriz). I found the name so close to one of my favorite flowers, the iris, so I thought I'd put it all in the vase of Sunku. Hope you all enjoy it.
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i can only
IRiz count as two
rest tell me Rula
would you

This is how I hear the words. Each syllable is created with one VOWEL SOUND

Ir/is
Ro /yal / ty
Faith /and / va /lor

Ir / is
The / Hea /ven's
Bridge / to / the / Earth

Ir/is
A / la /dy
In / Sun/ ku / form

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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now pleas also see my sunku posted
sllbiiiii!!!!

Hello Rula!
I am speachless. Thank you for your wonderful poem concluding our workshop. Workshop that was enriched by your presense and talant.

I have chosen the penname just based on my first name initial and a last name fused together.
With Russian accent it does sounds like Iris,(a name of a Greek godess messanger that connects people) because we have a tendency to soften consoenants at the end of the word.
It is a very poetic member of the Olimpus.
I relate to her because I wanted to bring messages of love and kindness to the world and help to connect people together. Neopoet is a great means for the purpose.
I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Sincerely yours, Irene Riz.

IRiz

dear. Happy to know that you like it.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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