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An Invisible Tale
I, the Fair Maiden
So weak and frail,
Trapped without hope of ever being freed
In a tower so tall
Even Rapunzel’s hair
Couldn’t ease my plight
Dark cold damp air
Sometimes, razor blade winds
Ravaged are my thoughts, stripped away
Naked and hollow
Echoes of loneliness bellowing through my ears
Whistling sorrow, as I lay
Sometimes I glimpse the shadow of my Dragon
furious eyes of yellow and green
although he’s blind
Fire enraged upon his breath
His serpent scales so big
Eating a banquet of the king’s feast, on one
Is all I can imagine
Sometimes I see him
Spreading his wings
Opening his very own
Book of hope
Swaying tail, as long as a corridor
That looks like an invite for escape?
My cold aching bones
Alas too weak to leave
Passing my open stone window
He flies, Into the black of night
Over the forest naked without light
Back home, to his very own Myth
And I, the Fair Maiden
I will never sleep tight
But I have hope
His cold blood will one day turn warm
Regaining his sight
To rescue me.
Comments
Candlewitch
Sat, 2020-08-08 09:33
WOW!
a fairytale that transcends time...ageless! I pray your personal dragon does regain his sight and frees both you and himself! there is such depth to this piece!
*hugs, Cat
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Teddy15
Sat, 2020-08-08 11:43
Dearest Cat
I had a good feeling you would like this, I really appreciate your gorgeous review, there is indeed a deepness and I'm glad you saw it.
Your words mean so much my dear friend also to me.
Thank you...Teddy
Candlewitch
Sat, 2020-08-08 14:12
:) I loved it...tickled my
:) I loved it...tickled my fancy !
When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!
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Teddy15
Sat, 2020-08-08 11:45
Dear jerryk
How fun to visit rapunzel's tower, so cool. Thank you for your kind words.
Thank you...Teddy
Geezer
Sat, 2020-08-08 10:17
I like the...
short concise lines, that tell the story without any extra thought. It seems that telling the story is the paramount thing here.
I think that we all have our personal dragons, except that many of us don't know it. Yours seems to be aware of you, just not inclined to help out, [blind, cold blood]. Nice job of bringing him to life for us. ~ Geez.
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Teddy15
Sat, 2020-08-08 11:46
Dear Geezer
You have managed to look deep into this, I adore dragons and stories of Fair maidens so I just thought I'd put something down for myself. Thank you Sir.
Thank you...Teddy