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Intrepidation

Where will the words come from
When at last we meet
After all this time will I know you
Long walks on barren planes
Will yield all waited to be told
Are the tears that are shed
Of disappointment or joy
Tell me true
To look upon your face
and hear your voice at last
Then what if you should walk away
Leaving me only wanting more
I await the the day with trepidation
An image has been in my mind
for fifteen long years
but is it imagination
or who I might hope to find

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I love your wistful poem marred only by those nuisance typos; yet I found myself so wrapped up in the sadness of your tone that I gladly overlooked the typos. Wonderful sentiments. Please check the title's spelling and line 4, "barren." Yours, Jerry

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thank you it wasn't meant to be sad but if that is the feeling you got then ok

I did check the spelling in three different dictionaries and that is the correct spelling however I did fix barren lol

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Well I like this very much, seems there is a reunion ahead. Line13 you have the the, typo. Fear is a powerful emotion. Let's set it aside, you are a very strong lady. Xoxox
I'll come back to hear more.

Thank you...Teddy

typo is fixed.thanks oh but you do not know the person nervous ,and scared is what I am but it may never come to pass I have a whole year to worry about it

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Now I'm curious even more, I thought maybe a new baby in the family but that takes less than a year, oh you do tease!

Thank you...Teddy

lol the fifteen years is the clue

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I was also thinking a mile stone birthday or anniversary I have to come to terms that I may never know! I may add a new sin to make 8 (Noseyness). lol I am going to investigate some more.

Thank you...Teddy

Conway Twitty? The song? I shall go away now but I'm coming back with my red cheeks later.

ps I googled 15 years ago lol, I don't mind to be silly

Thank you...Teddy

tomorrow is my 86th birthday for real, and here is a short list of what I need: I want a . . . and a . . . and then a ... see? I told ya it would be a short list, lol.
Jerry

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And A very Happy and Blessed Birthday to you kind sir

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